Hi Hoff123, that is the sound of adventure, for sure !
Still it sounds a bit "raw", have you considered using some convolution reverb (hall type) to add presence to the strings ? I bet it would sound much better !
Strings don't stand out that well as the drums can be quite overpowering. The melody does not seem to be "in-your-face" center including the contrabass. Maybe it's due to a phase inversion (like the right channel being out-of-phase with the left channel)? I really think the bass (not the drum) and melody will need to stand out.
Otherwise, good job.
--Grayson Peddie
Music Interest: New Age w/ a mix of modern smooth jazz, light techno/trance & downtempo -- something Epcot Future World/Tomorrowland-flavored.