The way you go away

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The way you go away

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In this song I wanted to experiment the mix of two languages with a latin rithmics to give a nostalgic sound.

https://soundcloud.com/kami-luni/the-way-you-go-away

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Thank you for listening.

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Like it! Very good work.

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Very nice song! And solo, the guitar tone is excellent.

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This is really good, the vocals especially!

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Post by oscillator »

This is a frigging hit song!

I do like the deep bass that you always provide!

The duo language style already got me when Trans X release their first LP (English and Canadian-French). :)

That solo 1/3 in is awesome!!!

Love it!

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Hi @kamiluni , the song is very well arranged. The rhythm encourages the feet to move. Your sound palette fits the music very nicely. The instruments are mixed well.
Only your vocals could be a little more present in the mix. It might be a matter of relative volume, perhaps a little more top end on the vocals. You sing very well. Perhaps if you had decreased the reverb a touch on the vocals and maybe added a little bit of that reverb to the snare that too might have served to glue the whole song together even more.
This is only so noticeable because the instrument mix and the vocal mix are very well done, your performance and arrangement are so perfect. The Yamaha synth workstations work really well for that and you hit on one of the sweet spots within a great instrument.

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Before all, thanks to all.

@jeanette_c thanks for your advice. Anyway, this song is used by as starting material for a mix course made by a professional sound engineer, so probably what you are speaking about the voice will be fixed. Thank you.
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