"The Truth." (all made with Ardour on Linux)
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"The Truth." (all made with Ardour on Linux)
- Wrote it on my guitar (just chords + voice)
- Put the chords on JjazzLab and tried a lot of different solutions
- Exported MIDI to Ardour 6.2 (compiled by myself ^_^)
- Changed a lot of MIDI stuff: added bass variations, modified a lot of octaves, modified some note velocity, tried a lot of different instruments, added tempo ramps for the ending. I used only one non free-as-in-freedom VST for the bass, all the rest is FOSS.
- In the meanwhile, I wrote the lyrics. I noticed I had to find some rhymes between words with the accent on the last third syllable. There are not so many words like those in English so I liked to find some of them, using the ones I thought to sound well (e.g. "mutable / indisputable"). From those rhymes I ended to find a meaning to the song and so I built the other verses
- Recorded my voice (just one take, lot of small mistakes, bad voice, but I thought it was ok like this in order to make it sound more natural)
- Splitted pad in two different instruments, one for the verse and one for the chorus. Verse became a Synth Cello from GM Fluidsynth, chorus became a nice and trance pad from ZynAddSubFX
- Added effects (chorus for guitars, reverb mostly everywhere, eq, flanger on Zyn, compression and eq on voice, etc.)
- Added a muted track with only MIDI beats, connected to a sidechain compressor put on Zyn pad
- Recorded my own electric guitar with some Zoom effects for the final solo
- Exported in wav
- Loaded wav into Audacity and added loudness normalization to -14dB (YouTube standard) then applied a soft limiter to -1dB
- Made a small video with Ardour playing the song (but the audio comes from the modified wav)
- Loaded on YouTube with Creative Commons license.
And that's the result:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijSCTz3zhrc
(sooner or later I'll upload all on Soundcloud but I need time to reorganize my old demos)
Hope you like it, keeping in mind I'm not expert in any kind of music arrangement, I'm just a Linux user who sometimes likes to write some songs on his guitar English is not my mother language (I'm Italian) so please pardon me for the inevitable small mistakes and bad pronunciation.
I'd like to know what you think about this song, critic or bad reviews included (they help me to improve myself).
The Lyrics:
The Truth.
(lyrics and music by Stefano Droghetti, 2020, © Creative Commons BY-NC)
Truth may break your dreams, it’s indisputable
may lead you to relive a heinous youth
Always unrevealed, dim and mutable
naked, lost and bare, it’s just the truth
Living in your lie was so beautiful
telling which is which and who is who
with all those you deceived you’ve been so merciful
but then again appeared the awful truth
Hey, can you feel the adrenaline?
please don’t mess with your medicine
it’s twisting your face
And wait, are you feeling delusional?
your own life is material and now it points at you
Hidden in the dark all those minions
crawling in the dirt for just a quid
they have been designed with rack and pinion
looking for the sign, they never stop
Some day in the woods you’ll see the orioles
gliding in the wind they’ll sing at you
and then you’ll recognize the secondary role
you had in all the stats they call the truth
Hey, can you feel the adrenaline?
please don’t mess with your medicine
it’s twirling your brain
And wait, are you feeling delusional?
your life is material and now it points at you
oh, it’s pointing at you
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I've downloaded that bass plugin - I have a bass and have real bass guitar on all my current songs but due to disability I'm struggling a bit in that department, so I'll give it a try. Do you know if any of the other Samsara plugins are any good? What are "Zoom" effects on the guitar?
Well done!
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So you've started tinkering with Ardour 6 already? Luck you! I'm still waiting for Fedora to update the package... I'm still stuck with 5 (not that I'm complaining, I've learned to love it in the meanwhile). It was fun to see the different effects you applied on the different tracks and how they were working, looking at the video.
While I like the song and most sounds, one thing I'm not a fan of is the synthetic acoustic guitar that plays in the background. Since you're a guitar player, I would have expected that part to be played live: as it is, it makes the song seem more "fake". I think the solo ends a bit too soon too (it feels like it closes abruptly) but that may just be the guitar player in me Drums could be better as well, what did you use there? Apart from these tiny nits, I think you did a very good job!
As a side note, not sure why you chose to do loudness normalization in Audacity? Couldn't you have done it in Ardour instead?
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Thank you so much, that's actually what I just wanted to do: share a thing I think is catchy with some other people who can appreciate it.turbidh20 wrote: ↑Fri Sep 04, 2020 3:11 pm I like it I wasn't sure at first with the melody but I'm finding it quite catchy now! I like your voice. Great guitar part, I would have liked to have heard more of that throughout the track. And well done writing lyrics in your non-native language, very good.
Guitar part is very short because I'm lazy. I'm not a good guitarist, I'm able to play only very simple solos, so when I make a demo I just put a short solo to say "OK that's how I would like to be a solo here, longer and played by a pro":-)
I think it's a good bass, years ago it was the only really believable one in free-as-a-free-beer VST world, but I guess now maybe there's something better. I don't know any other Samsara plugins. I mean, never tried them.I've downloaded that bass plugin - I have a bass and have real bass guitar on all my current songs but due to disability I'm struggling a bit in that department, so I'll give it a try. Do you know if any of the other Samsara plugins are any good? What are "Zoom" effects on the guitar? Well done!
Zoom is the brand for guitar effects My one is a Zoom G3Xn, I bought it because it's very good in emulating the sound of a Vox AC-30 and other British stuff and also because I sometimes need a hardware effect rack to play live.
Ahahah grazie, un saluto anche a te!!!
Yes Ardour6.2 is really easy to compile. I did it on Ubuntu 20.04. If any other people did it yet, I'll be glad to post how to do it in this forum.So you've started tinkering with Ardour 6 already? Luck you! I'm still waiting for Fedora to update the package... I'm still stuck with 5 (not that I'm complaining, I've learned to love it in the meanwhile). It was fun to see the different effects you applied on the different tracks and how they were working, looking at the video.
DAWs nowadays are kind of "beautiful", with all those tracks, metres, plugins and scores dancing at the tempo beat, so I thought it was nice to make a video just like that.
Absolutely true. But, as I said, I'm lazy It would have taken a week or two more, just to redo something that was already on track. So I just said to myself "come on, it's just a demo" and that's the lousy result.While I like the song and most sounds, one thing I'm not a fan of is the synthetic acoustic guitar that plays in the background. Since you're a guitar player, I would have expected that part to be played live: as it is, it makes the song seem more "fake".
Sure the solo is too short for the reason I wrote before. Drums are the normal "General MIDI" instrument in Ardour default. I tried some more drum kits but in the end, for that kind of semi-electro pop greasy stuff, I preferred that kinda sound. Mostly for the snare: I like that vintage, boxed sound. If I had more time, I would have separate the snare to keep it with that sound, and played the rest with a nicer FOSS drumkit, like DrumGizmo.I think the solo ends a bit too soon too (it feels like it closes abruptly) but that may just be the guitar player in me Drums could be better as well, what did you use there? Apart from these tiny nits, I think you did a very good job!
I prefer to use Ardour to make a dynamic, response flat master. Then, according to the media where I want to publish the song, I use the very fast and old Audacity way: I can try lots of different loudness+limiter settings in a second, from very mild ones to insanely loud radio edit for parties or live sets.As a side note, not sure why you chose to do loudness normalization in Audacity? Couldn't you have done it in Ardour instead?
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Very good Paul McCartney-esque piece! I expected a nice melodic solo and you delivered
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You guys are making my ego bigger and bigger
I got this weird idea to use your comments as ads if I'll ever promote the song... as like as on film posters
I'm really happy you appreciated the guitar solo sound, I tried a lot of tuning to achieve a sort of brit sound, and it wasn't easy with my 210€ guitar: https://www.thomann.de/it/harley_benton ... ns_red.htm
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I agree with this, I've seen a few of these videos and I usually tend to like them.
I loved this song by the way, I'm really impressed with how professional it sounds; both the composition and the mix. Great work!
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Thank you so much!
I'd love to point out that the instrumental bridge and the finale are 90% a JjazzLab automatic arrangement, probably a Yamaha style. I just changed the instruments and some velocities, then I had the idea of putting those rhythm and tempo changes inside that song, which is based on a different and much more modified JJazzLab style.
I think I'll ask for a collaboration from you all in this forum to arrange my next song... I'd like to create something with this great community, rather than searching for JJazzLab presets ^_^ So probably you'll see me soon in the "Virtual Music Projects" forum session.
I'm a SUDO wrestler - Italy - Ubuntu 22.04 - Ardour 8.6
All my songs: www.soundcloud.com/stefano-droghetti/se ... -droghetti
My Youtube channel: www.youtube.com/@StefanoDroghetti/featured
My homepage (in Italian): www.stefanodroghetti.it