The Deep Ravine

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The Deep Ravine

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My entry for the most most recent OSMP "Riff it!" tunestorm https://soundcloud.com/lfzawacki/ownlif ... eep-ravine

More info into the recording, sounds used and lyrics on the tracks's description. The song still has one more verse and a chorus before it's really complete, but I wanted to finish it in time for the tunestorm so here it is. Any feedback is appreciated :)
Ownlife - prog rock project: http://ownlife.lfzawacki.com
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Hi,

Great job! Good mix and I really like the atmosphere created by the guitars and vocals. It reminds me a bit of Alice in Chains (take that as a compliment). A great piece of work considering you had to use Riffs written by someone else.

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I like the way it gets really intense around the halfway mark. and then there's that seriously tasty guitar lead at the end :D

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Way to rise to the challenge! I especially liked the vocals and the sweet guitar solo.
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GMaq wrote:Hi,

Great job! Good mix and I really like the atmosphere created by the guitars and vocals. It reminds me a bit of Alice in Chains (take that as a compliment). A great piece of work considering you had to use Riffs written by someone else.
Thanks. I wasn't aiming for Alice in Chains, but I see what you mean :) . This mix was really hard to do, never could make it work with so much instruments ... but it actually ended up sounding really good for this song.
folderol wrote:I like the way it gets really intense around the halfway mark. and then there's that seriously tasty guitar lead at the end :D
ufug wrote:Way to rise to the challenge! I especially liked the vocals and the sweet guitar solo.
Thanks had to do many takes until it sounded right, but I'm happy I could strike a balance between melody and shredding for this one.
Ownlife - prog rock project: http://ownlife.lfzawacki.com
Mortticia - heavy metal band: https://mortticia.rocks/
Musical Artifacts - find sample libraries, presets, patches: https://musical-artifacts.com
Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/lfzawacki

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