Acidjazz(core)

[evlsht]

Hi, here's a new track i made mith Renoise and Mixbus

https://soundcloud.com/evilshit/phaelencey

[tatch]

i think it's not in 4/4? i can't find the beat at all. i think the first element that comes in is too dynamically flat as well which could make finding the beat even harder

[evlsht]

Thanks for the comments, the fist part is actually 17/16, just added 1/4 beat to the basic 4/4, cause it sounded better this way, the second part goes back to 4/4
i admit my music rarely takes pause, or short ones, and i've been told it's like "tiring" so you're probably right here
Thanks for the Calf Crusher for the bass drive

[Baggypants]

The first thing the rhythm made me think of is this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgJ0kBhsQRE which is totally different. The only thing I'd like is if you quieted the brass a little at the start and made the piano in the middle section a little louder, otherwise it's fantastic.