this is a w.i.p. made with LMMS ... operating system : ubuntu 12.10
https://soundcloud.com/djallalnamri/step-up
thanks for listening and feedbacks in advance
new w.i.p.
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Re: new w.i.p.
and this the link for the finished work :
https://soundcloud.com/djallalnamri/ste ... ished-work
https://soundcloud.com/djallalnamri/ste ... ished-work
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That's good.
War, crime, disease, starvation, extreme poverty; these are serious things.
Music? Not so serious. Have some fun!
Music? Not so serious. Have some fun!
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sorry for late answer and thank you very very much for nice and encouraging commentAnthonyCFox wrote:That's good.
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I enjoyed that. Its very early 90's, videogame-ish sounding but its twice as long as it need be - the last 4m seem a bit disjointed.
I'd halve it but move a greatly condensed version of the elevator recording bit - I'd shrink that to just a few seconds long and slot it into a 4m edit somewhere as that was a nice touch.
I'd halve it but move a greatly condensed version of the elevator recording bit - I'd shrink that to just a few seconds long and slot it into a 4m edit somewhere as that was a nice touch.
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first sorry for late answer and thank you very much for listening and commentingdanboid wrote:I enjoyed that. Its very early 90's, videogame-ish sounding but its twice as long as it need be - the last 4m seem a bit disjointed.
I'd halve it but move a greatly condensed version of the elevator recording bit - I'd shrink that to just a few seconds long and slot it into a 4m edit somewhere as that was a nice touch.
i must say all of my tracks become disjointed few mns before the end ... it is mainly because of lack of time ... and loss of inspiration in the process ... - i do this after work ... while dealing with family and personnal problems ... lol !!! -
i think from now on i will use the moviemaking technique of the sketched story board ... : i will imagine a story than turn into a soundtrack ...
i usually do not like to cut recordings that sound of good quality to me ... this is about the elevator ... btw i mixed the elevator bell ... which is not part the elevator recording ...
again thank you very very much for listening and commenting ...
btw i use LMMS and mainly soundfonts to compose tracks ... and OS is ubuntu 12.10
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thank you very very much ... i really do appreciate ...funkmuscle wrote:that was freakin' sweet.. great work!!
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