showing my work and progress here, hope somebody likes ;-)

[Capoeira]

thanks for hereing and comenting.

Sounds good. Nice job with the percussions.. did you play them with a keyboard ?

no man, i think its quite impossible to play realistic percussion on keyboard, i don't know. the percussion are all loops

You could try to introduce some variations with the tempo of the song.. maybe a progression from slower to faster.. as in capoeira

i don't know if that will sound good. which song of the 2 do you mean?

[Yeri]

i don't know if that will sound good. which song of the 2 do you mean?

It's not about a particular song.. it's a general feeling that they might improve if they had faster parts.. percussion rythms are ok.. but imho they are too slow and hence, make the songs sound slow.
I'm not an expert on brazilian music, and maybe you like that velocity. I'm used to hear music with faster rythms (as you could appreciate in 'my first song' ) and I like that.. so, the velocity is the first thing I've noticed while hearing your songs.

[Capoeira]

i don't know if that will sound good. which song of the 2 do you mean?

It's not about a particular song.. it's a general feeling that they might improve if they had faster parts.. percussion rythms are ok.. but imho they are too slow and hence, make the songs sound slow.
I'm not an expert on brazilian music, and maybe you like that velocity. I'm used to hear music with faster rythms (as you could appreciate in 'my first song' ) and I like that.. so, the velocity is the first thing I've noticed while hearing your songs.

oh, ok. i understand. that is diferent style of music. but thank you for giving your opinion

[Capoeira]

added another track (first song i wrote)
http://palcomp3.cifraclub.terra.com.br/FabioCapoeira